Why am I proud of this?
I'm proud of this essay because I worked very hard on it. I spent a lot of time researching about this topic. It was also fun to write because I was already interested to begin with.
I feel like I learned more from the subject that I was already interested in (psychology). There was a personal benefit to this essay. I think I wrote it fairly well. I went in depth and tried using appropriate language so my topic would be hard to argue with. I felt there weren't a lot of holes in my argument.
I didn't even fully agree with my own argument when I first started this essay. But once I got into it and researched, I wholeheartedly agree.
I feel like I learned more from the subject that I was already interested in (psychology). There was a personal benefit to this essay. I think I wrote it fairly well. I went in depth and tried using appropriate language so my topic would be hard to argue with. I felt there weren't a lot of holes in my argument.
I didn't even fully agree with my own argument when I first started this essay. But once I got into it and researched, I wholeheartedly agree.